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Noctiphobia
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Noctiphobia |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I hear shallow breathing quicken in fright, You fear shadow’s depth that’s walking the night, I sense the throbbing of full veins flowing And gaze into your eyes where fear’s showing. My soft movement sends you blindly running, Imagined pains from your mind is coming, Clouding all with overwhelming panic, Growing nausea makes you fall down sick. Retching in the shadows flows self torment, The morning sun finds you completely spent, I watch from my safe lingering shadows In the light you think no one now follows. Remember night is just hours away, And I’ll return when you finish the day. Gloom Noctiphobia : The Fear of Night |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Another...please... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interesting write. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an eerie quality not at all unlike the fear itself... nice work Gloom |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I hear shallow breathing quicken in fright, You fear shadow’s depth that’s walking the night, I sense the throbbing of full veins flowing And gaze into your eyes where fear’s showing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ great lines enjoyed very much ~~ Connie~~ |
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