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newmanwalking69
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0 posted 2002-04-10 04:13 PM



when everything goes wrong i wish everything would go right
  when i think things are right people tell me they are wrong
when i find something wrong i want them to be right
  when everything is right i can relax in peace
when everything is right for me it is read that i will be dead.
  when love is everything you know everything could be right
love is a magicial power not an emotion like people say
  its magic everywhere its in tree, birds, and everything you see
when my love is right i will be in heaven, when my love ends up
  wrong i'll probably be in hell. but for now my love for who
is the who i love the most is all i need to survive and when i know my love
  gets stronger i'll know things are happy and calm. but now
everything is uneasy and rocky. so when your in love always think
  your love can always get stronger.


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1 posted 2002-04-10 04:15 PM



Welcome to Passions, Newman...I think you're going to like it here!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting...and have a good time!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


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2 posted 2002-04-10 04:16 PM




BRAVO!!! Yes, yes, may we always believe in love and let it grow stronger as we hold onto it, sweet friend, this is wonderful! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) This is a marvelous first post, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! Ooohhhh...and please check your e-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions for you! We all love you you so much, sweet friend, I can't wait to read more of your work! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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3 posted 2002-04-10 04:17 PM


Hello, welcome to Passions, you'll love it here I know!
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4 posted 2002-04-10 04:26 PM


And when it is right...you will know!

Welcome to Passions...enjoy!

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2002-04-10 04:34 PM


welcome to passions and well done
on your love view..enjoyed this

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2002-04-10 04:37 PM


thanks for sharing..*s

and welcome

M

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7 posted 2002-04-10 04:40 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
You'll find lots of poetry here on love..
or the lack thereof...
Come on in and enjoy yourself!
Very well done first post!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 2002-04-10 08:17 PM


Hi Nick!!! I enjoyed your poem, I've always told you that you had talent, do you believe me now! I was telling the truth.  
Look around and have fun sweetie.

joanna

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (04-10-2002 08:17 PM).]

Skyfire
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9 posted 2002-04-11 01:06 AM


"your love can always get stronger"


I love that line! Welcome to Passions, I think I'm going to like you!

Magicmystery
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10 posted 2002-04-11 01:50 AM


I love an Optimist!!!!

Welcome to passions!!!

Love, Light and Peace

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

SEA
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11 posted 2002-04-11 10:01 AM


Welcome! great first post looking forward to more from you
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2002-04-11 10:10 AM


newmanwalking69
Welcome, enjoyed.

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13 posted 2002-04-11 10:55 AM


Welcome to Passions.  I look forward to more of your work

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