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Whenever I Feel the Need |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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You are always there in my quiet moments, shared under cover of darkness. A tear flows without your touch, my only wish, for your happiness. I hold the beauty of you in my heart and whenever I feel the need I press my hand to still its beat, letting it flow into my touch where I then fold my fingers upon thoughts of you. We rock back and forth, You and I, unconditional me, versus acceptance you. My words of passion reach deep and sincere realizing that you, after all, were correct. That acceptance takes in unconditional, yet nothing is without conditions. You gave me my name, Moonchild, produced in me poetry, stole my heart's connections until I have become swept into another day of loving you. I have framed you upon memories shelf, and there you will remain until... MM "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh nice write naked one bearing your soul yet again |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that's me the old soul barer *s thanks Walt.. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-10-2002 06:40 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe it's time to redecorate  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
no redecorating necessary..just a little tidying up is all I need.. thanks *s M |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I hope that shelf is in a valt where you can't get to it anymore |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! This is indeed a great resemblance to spring cleaning, sweet friend, may you place all your treasured memories on a mantel where you can always see them and tidy everything else with new replenished hope! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The Moonchild in you still sings sweetly...very good Maureen...very good... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
M, wonderful write, and sharing of your soul...many lines in this touched me... you have an amazing gift! just beautiful. take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl this is utterly utterly gorgeous. I truly am amazed by it’s beauty and warmed by its presence. This is wonderful writing, do you ever have an off day? I don’t think so. Outstanding poem from you utterly outstanding writer. YOU still have the ability to lift your heart in song truly beautiful    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Maureen just lovely, and those last two lines are so wonderful. floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Maureen, this is very beautiful. ((Marueen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey "I", why would I want to vault it to be unreachable..just curious, guess I give out different meanings than I intend to *s M Thank you Noah for your constant caring replies, and Sunshine for your kind words. Amy, it pleases me that you enjoy reading me hugss M |
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