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Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2002-05-13 09:01 PM

“To My Muse
As a
Flower of life
You are my one red rose
And everyone knows
How I feel about
A Rose
****
**
**
**
A picture of beautiful innocence
Is my hearts picture of you
Lost somewhere inside me
Is a picture of perfection
Temptress of my manly instincts
Causing loves sweet resurrection
When I look deep inside of me
I find you hiding in my mind
Helping me to bridge the abyss of loneliness
Allowing me to walk in the gardens of pleasure
My love for you is beyond all possible measure
Bound by invisible chains of love and devotion
Giving to each other pain and pleasure as equals
With fights to forget and make-ups to treasure
Life together may not be a pleasure cruise
But Princess you are my forever muse

© IcyHeart
05/13/02

[This message has been edited by Alan (05-13-2002 09:19 PM).]

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-05-13 09:03 PM

Now that's a good muse poem. And I like how you colored the words as a rose...

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2002-05-13 09:21 PM

Bsquirrel...she IS a special muse. This is my first serious try at html. Thank you for your comments
alan

DestinysCharm
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 90

3 posted 2002-05-14 04:18 PM

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-05-14 04:21 PM

Excellent Alan!
Love the presentation as well as the words.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2002-05-14 08:39 PM

But I seem to remember you favorite is yellow...nicely done

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

6 posted 2002-05-14 08:43 PM

DestinysCharm... thank for putting some light on this for me... should I take it that you liked it?

Enchantress.. Glad you enjoyed it. Hugs right back at you.

Paula... It IS great to see you again. You are right yellow is my favorite but red shows better.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2002-05-14 09:11 PM

Alan - I really enjoyed this poem....well penned sir. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

8 posted 2002-05-14 11:01 PM

Thanks Chris.... I enjoyed doing this.

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