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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-05-13 01:02 AM




Hints And Indications

If when feeling blank
What could you find
With nothing to pen
Can you read a mind

Can you see my eyes
Brown, blue or green
How would you start
Are minds ever seen

If without the writing
I leave a blank space
Could you know me
Do you view my face

Can you see emotion
Upon this very day
Could you read me
If I’ve nothing to say

What of my strengths
The way that I write
Hints and indications
Of left brain or right

Do you read feelings
Open them and view
Did I leave my mark
On the minds of you

Hope

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Duncan
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1 posted 2002-05-13 01:11 AM


Can you see emotion
Upon this very day
Could you read me
If I’ve nothing to say

This poem read so lyrically, it was truly a pleasure to hear.  And I loved the pondering of it.  Very cool.

HopeS
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2 posted 2002-05-13 01:18 AM


Thanks for reading Duncan and for your kind thoughtful reply , yes it does leave one to ponder if we cannot see the naked eye
hope

Alan
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3 posted 2002-05-13 09:52 PM


Words do open doors Hope. Wonderful read
alan

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4 posted 2002-05-14 08:58 AM




(sigh) Wow, this is a wonderful poem on honesty and body language, sweet friend, I think it is important to be read when one doesn't speak, though I think it is important to always speak up if one is ever going to help or relate to you! (kiss on cheek) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

HopeS
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5 posted 2002-05-14 09:23 AM


Thanks for you reply Alan
are you open ?? "Knock , Knock "
Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2002-05-14 09:25 AM


Thanks for your sweet , kind , thoughtful reply Noah
yes writing this did make me think
do we know the person , behind the pen and ink ?
Hope

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