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My Porcelain Rain ( Taken From My Poem Vanilla Breeze)
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My Porcelain Rain ( Taken From My Poem Vanilla Breeze) |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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My Porcelain Rain It's clearly one thing to know the mighty rain But, it's another when the rain's all you know It's hard to live it and drown at the very same time When the waters never care to let me go... I've taken my seas and my rivers, these gathered rains Upon rippling waves drifting into his hands Now, my waters surround him pulling him under, too So, how can he really see me when he longs for dry land... Sometimes, when it's pouring imagination is calling And, I simply surrender to that steady flow I change it, arrange it, to fall never the same Then my porcelain pieces let go... If it has to rain at least it can be flawless And, under these waters I'm unrecognizable to him Maybe he'll see the me that made it to the surface at last Cause, it's not through tears of sadness this time that I swim... Though delicate still I ride the currents along Ever-changing as I'm hoping he sees Something desirable a little more admirable And, oh, so fearless to be intimately free... I don't care if the waters caress what I own best Cause, in my porcelain rain my mind doesn't rest I'll lie beneath it if it's falling down For, below my porcelain rain imagery is found... Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Porcelain rain a concept which wonders at the sharpeness of the shards that of couse is assuming life as shattered and I feel that is not your point at all Still in my pitiless lack of understanding a read filled with self and the real reminding tired eyes of what life was Well done EH |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Saunni, this is sooooo emotionally powerful, sweet friend, sometimers it is important to be tugged by the cureent so He can help us and help us to grow stronger and more aware to ourselves so we can go singing in the rain with that new renewed spirit! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Saunni A tender and beautiful write. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That was beautiful and right. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . I love the flow of this Saunni!! it's so wonderfully delicate and soft. . . another one of your best. . .you grow more every day. . . glad that I found this. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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