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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2002-04-10 07:22 AM




You are the need
that makes me breathe
You are the light of my soul
in which my spirit roams
And if time could
stand still
I'd like to be
in the moment that we are
together in a kiss
Thanks for loving me

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2002-04-10 07:32 AM


*Sigh*. Beautiful Walker

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
2 posted 2002-04-10 07:34 AM


walker,
this is nice soft and romantic, although maybe I'm warped but the only way I could see a kiss lasting that long is if braces got locked together.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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3 posted 2002-04-10 08:45 AM




(smiles) This is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your spirit always shine in his heart and sparkle with true love forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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4 posted 2002-04-10 02:10 PM


Nice place to be...good one, walker!
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2002-04-10 02:14 PM


Just a moment ... I wish I'd written that

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2002-04-10 04:10 PM


short and sweet but full of meaning
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-04-10 04:43 PM


I have similar thoughts myself sometimes...James
CocoBaci
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8 posted 2002-05-01 01:13 AM


if time could
stand still
I'd like to be
in the moment that we are
together in a kiss


Walker, this is reallllllly sweet...
Smiles2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

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