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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-05-07 10:05 PM

She reminded
him of
dawn.
Her dishwater
blonde hair
was
the color
of dishwater;
at an
allnight
diner;
at dawn.
Some
might refer
to
an allnight
diner as
a
greasy spoon.
What's your
point
one might ask.
So was
her hair.
Not a spoon;
greasy.
It just
goes
to show;
love is not
a spoon;
love is
greasy,
the color of
dishwater;
at
dawn.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-05-07 10:13 PM

(smiles) WOW!!! ooohhhhh...this is such an interesting metaphor of love, sweet friend, I never thought of love that way, this is excellent! (big hugggssssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-05-07 10:57 PM

Interesting perspective, as I read this twice. Applaud your creativity and earthy disposition. ThisDiamond

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2002-05-07 11:07 PM

Tim

Something tells me that you write here with your serious and your tongue in cheek..besides, love doesn't care, does it? It just blooms, and sometimes from places you never would suspect. Enjoyed this.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2002-05-08 02:51 AM

Tim

this was a very interesting write, and
quite refreshing and i'm taking the side
of Martie...I think that love just happens
and doesn't matter from where. wonderful
write...
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-05-08 05:58 AM

quote:
love is
greasy,
the color of
dishwater;
at
dawn.

The analogy does not escape us...the question is, why didn't any of us write it quite this way, before? It is always so good to see you here!

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2002-05-10 07:46 AM

Cute, Tim.. Very cute!
Isn't Dawn dishwasher detergent a bubbly blue hue?...

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