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Helea
Junior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 15
Canada

0 posted 2002-04-10 12:36 PM



The Past

When I look at your picture
Tears swell up in my eyes.
My heart starts beating faster...
My hands turn as cold as ice.
Memories start coming back...
Memories of those wonderful days.

All of the sudden I am back in the past...
Holding your hand,
Kissing your lips...
In those wonderful days when you and I were one.
Helea Eunice


I am new and I hope to be able to meet many new friends here!!!  *hugs*  Helea

© Copyright 2002 Helea - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
1 posted 2002-04-10 12:52 PM


Helea,
Ten posts definitely qualifies as being new! LOL And you shouldn't be disappointed about making new friends here either. Nice poem. I struggle with free verse but you do it well. Welcome and I hope you enjoy it here as much as me. Watch for Sunshine. If you haven't gotten your surprise you will.

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2002-04-10 01:39 AM


Helea,

welcome to passions! this was a wonderful
first piece and made me smile in knowing
how you feel...wonderful writing! i look
forward to reading more from you.

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Rick
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
3 posted 2002-04-10 06:13 AM


Dear Helea, nice to meet you here at pip, we all have many friends here and welcome you as another in this growing family. I enjoyed you write and hope to see many more over time.

Sincerely Rick

See me?
Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93
UK
4 posted 2002-04-10 06:29 AM


Welcome to pip Helea, hope you get as much from pip as I do and i hope you feel you can relate to some others poems. Great first write, full of alot of emotions. keep on writing,
Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2002-04-10 08:07 AM


Nice writing Helea....James
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Portland, Oregon
6 posted 2002-04-10 08:59 AM




(smiles) Oh Helea, we are all so happy to be your friends and I would love to be a friend of yours too! (kiss on cheek) We are all so happy you're back, sweet friend, you are always a delight to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Decaflame
Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

7 posted 2002-04-10 12:41 PM



Welcome to Passions, Helea...

SmittenKitten
Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
8 posted 2002-04-10 12:44 PM



Helea~ Your words echo my own feelings today.  Welcome to Passions!  Make yourself at home

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Zinsser
Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
9 posted 2002-04-10 03:23 PM


Hello
nice to meet you... look forward to reading many more of your posts
   ~~ Connie ~~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
10 posted 2002-04-10 03:38 PM


A very nice poem..*s

M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
11 posted 2002-04-10 03:57 PM


hello I'm Dixie. Nice to have you here. Hope to read more of your writings. Oh, do yourself a favor and put those pics in the attic or basement and move on with today!!!
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