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Alan
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0 posted 2002-05-06 06:33 AM


What would you do?

If I were to kiss you?
What would you do?
Would you look at me in shock?
Or draw back your hand to give me a sock?

If I were to hold you?
What would you do?
Would you tell me to let you go?
Or do you really even know?

If I were to get lost in your eyes?
What would you advise?
Would you say I’m crazy?
Or that my mind is hazy.

Now tell me true.
Just what would you do.
If I
Wrapped you in my arms
Looked into your eyes
And kissed you

alan
05/05/02

© Copyright 2002 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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1 posted 2002-05-06 07:00 AM


Alan...It depends on the chemistry. If there's plenty of sizzle; then you would get a big kiss back.  GREAT POEM!!!!!  Love your style.   ***Ivy Rose
HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2002-05-06 08:57 AM


We have been friends
for the longest time
You know the answer of mine

my answer to this
I would return a friendly  kiss
Hope

Janette
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3 posted 2002-05-06 09:55 AM


"Or draw back you hand to give me a sock?"
I would never hit you

"Or do you really even know?"
I would lean in closer

"Or that my mind is hazy."
I would say com'ere

"Just what would you do"
I would melt, of course......

INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
4 posted 2002-05-06 10:00 AM


Ah, nicely done.  It is indeed the question, "what would you do?"

In my case, we would have a problem since I think we are both guys....ROFLOL.

INclan

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2002-05-06 10:01 AM


Alan,
I'll leave that for the ladies. Nice write.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-05-06 01:08 PM


Ah Alan, first, it is so nice to see you here!
I may just kiss you back...ya never know!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2002-05-06 01:44 PM


Both...yes and no.
bsquirrel
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8 posted 2002-05-06 01:58 PM


Heh heh.
Sven
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9 posted 2002-05-06 02:35 PM


sometimes, you just have to "shoot first" Alan. . .

great work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2002-05-06 03:24 PM


If it were the appropriate time and if a lady was thinking similar thoughts of you it would be a green light...one of those what if situations...James
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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11 posted 2002-05-06 04:25 PM


Alan - give it all a try, nothing to lose, everything to gain...

BC

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
12 posted 2002-05-12 12:19 PM


hmm..have been in the state of question....interesting write...

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is what happens while we're making other plans..."  ;)

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