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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-05-05 06:33 AM



Mathematics


what is the true sum of loving
it should be whole absolute value
more than variable degree
not the fraction of measure
I want the standard set
purest percent
no minus, can’t divide
just multiply and add
can’t be less than
but greater than
and equal to
the sign
infinity


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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1 posted 2002-05-05 08:59 AM


Dear 1slick_lady, you have definatly done your mathematics here, and the words you have formed from numbers add up to one great thought, you have captured the true meaning of absolute value and the true measure of love.

Enjoyed the read and the lesson.

Sincerely Rick


Larry C
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2 posted 2002-05-05 02:52 PM


Helen,
You have multiplied the pleasure of my day. Of course, my arithmetic skills weren't adequate to the task. LOL But I get the concept!

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-05-05 04:50 PM




(sigh) Oh Helen, I know just what you mean, we should always treat the gift of love as though it is the Fibonacchi number and always be willing to share, for love is infinite and should be given as much as possible to sum up promises the future holds! (kiss on cheek) This is powerfully provoking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-05-05 04:53 PM


a lovely write, Helen
*s
M

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