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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-05-05 12:21 PM








Flowers upon my heart,
Palm trees shading my dreams~~~
an oasis...that's what you are to me.

A place to run to, hide from
the intrusion of the world.
A comfort found in your words,
in your laughter.A peace
found in knowing that
we accept each other
for who we are as people.

You see my words, hear the messages
that they bring.I listen
to your words, hear the search
of your soul for a soulmate.

Like a thousand tolling bells,
the sound of your laughter.
Like the fluttering of myriads
of angels, your passion for life,
your passion for the fulfillment
of all your love-dreams.

Whether you are aware of it or not~~~

you place flowers upon my heart,
plant Palm trees around my soul
shedding light on the shadows
that try to overwhelm my dreams.


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1 posted 2002-05-05 12:27 PM




(smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may love always sprout flowers in your heart and fan your heart with palmettos and tropical shrubs! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-05-05 06:49 AM


Very nice Ivy...James
BloomingRose
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3 posted 2002-05-05 06:58 AM


Flowers upon my heart,
Palm trees shading my dreams~~~
an oasis...that's what you are to me.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Lovely poem. Enjoyed the imagery too.
Deb

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4 posted 2002-05-05 09:18 AM


Ivy Rose darling girl  You know I love this, it’s flow and message are utterly utterly divine, YOU darling heart always write well. This is utterly utterly wonderful as always you excel in everything you write

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (05-05-2002 09:21 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-05-05 09:29 AM


Ivy Rose,
Whether you are aware of it or not~~~
you place flowers upon my heart,
plant Palm trees around my soul
shedding light on the shadows
You could not say it better.

Victoria
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6 posted 2002-05-05 12:33 PM


you place flowers upon my heart,
plant Palm trees around my soul
shedding light on the shadows
that try to overwhelm my dreams.


beautifully penned Ivy..enjoyed very much..hugs..lovely thoughts

                ~Victoria



"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)



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7 posted 2002-05-05 12:49 PM


Such is the feeling of having been given so
much by another...Nicely done..

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