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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-05-04 02:07 PM



Come Fill My Glass

Come fill my glass with port wine. And
we can sip it as we dine. My eyes drink
in the sight of you. Follow the path my
thoughts lead to. I’ll watch your pulse
start to beat. As the air between us
begins to heat. Dining with you
is pure delight. And later we
can fill the night. With
touches that taste of
wine. With love
that feels
quite divine.
Fire rises
In my
eyes I’m
awed by
this warm
surprise
the wine
of love
flows all
through
now I lift my
glass to you. here’s
to wine and the night
here’s to love and wine’s delight

Marsha


Krissy beloved daughter do you see it has a twisted stem, isn’t this what you wished to do? My trick I think darling heart, as I’ve said before some of can and some of us just keep trying x x x



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (05-04-2002 02:08 PM).]

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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-05-04 02:34 PM


I assure you of this....Nicely done,  such
a sip of wine....BUTTTTTTTTTTT.... I am not
going to get into the midst of the rivalry
that is taking place between the two of you!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-05-04 02:38 PM


Marsha,
Wonderful display of your artistry. You are utterly amusing. Love Sy

Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2002-05-04 02:43 PM



I'll drink to that sweet girl!!

You raised your glass of wine marvellous.

Prosit

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

sigheyes
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4 posted 2002-05-04 02:48 PM


Nicely done.  I'm agreeing with Magnus on this one.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-05-04 04:10 PM


A little wine...a few kisses...some more wine and kisses...James
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6 posted 2002-05-04 05:06 PM



You make these gems look effortless, my Sister with all of the artistry....

vandana
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7 posted 2002-05-04 06:06 PM


enjoyed
Kethry
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8 posted 2002-05-04 07:03 PM


Mushy,
artistic effort my love, you two should take up bridge. I think you are great as competitors you would be fabulous as a team.
Keth


Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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9 posted 2002-05-04 10:22 PM




(giggles in delight) YAY!!! I love this wonderful shape poem, sweet friend, may you always quench the wine of life to your hearts content and find true loves joy always like its New Years Day everyday, sweet friend, this is a wonderful shape poem! (kiss on cheek) I must say too that I agree with Barry and will not compare you with Krissy either though! LOL! This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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