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The Golden Key
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The Golden Key |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost request: The Golden Key Not a law but a simple gauge Given in store within our fate On stone on page from age to age Passing alone from late to late. We hold on lip a simple truth A weight that tips the justice scale Ignored by most mainly youth No host, no grail, no cloak or vail. It lives a presence day to day An essence in a simple core A bray, a say, a path, a way And stays in truth forever more. It brooks to you, to all that heed To look within your shoal the whole. It takes no breed to work it's deed Your pull of soul will pole the goal. Just do unto others each one As would unto thyself have done. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We hold on lip a simple truth A weight that tips the justice scale Ignored by most mainly youth No host, no grail, no cloak or vail. =================================== A bray, a say, a path, a way And stays in truth forever more. ================================== It takes no breed to work it's deed Your pull of soul will pole the goal. Just do unto others each one As would unto thyself have done. =================================== Good morning Sy-babes!!  This is classic Sy poetry...full of life's most simple and yet profound truths... wisdom wrapped in rhyme, etched in time and engraved on this heart of mine. Thank you to Sun for her request of this gem of pen...its a reminder we all need to heed. You are the keeper of many keys me Stinkylove.   |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 ...thank you, Sy! It is still on my desk....in a frame! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Seymour~ Wow! Look at you go! Not only does this poem have such profound meaning to it, it's also so intricately woven. I love the rhyme from line to line and also the rhyming done within each line. Everything jumps out at you and the message is loud and clear, but you say it in such a soft way that it leaves the reader feeling touched, rather than preached at. Lovely! *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is awesome, truly exceptional writing. You again have excelled darling boy, you really are a master at this, capturing the words and pinning them to the page. Absolutely first class, you really are a very very fine writer. As I’ve mentioned once of maybe twice. And this with its perfect and exquisite language usage is simply stunning. Utterly utterly excellent writing and of course I love it utterly utterly  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy~Such a wonderful morning read! Enjoyed this one very much. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Good morning my Tinkerbell. It's stinky love. And where shall we fly today? Winliewinkie Randy Stinky.  Sunshine, You are the greatest. Krista, This is an exceptional reply and I humbly thank you for it. Marsha, You are utterly, utterly a doll. Enchantress, Thank you, hugs and love back. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, yes, your words resemble His Golden Rule, may we all treat each other the way we deserve to be treated to establish harmony and comfort for all! (big hugggssssss) This is an absolutely wonderful poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If we could all live by these words, what a respectful world this would be... Nicely done Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. Magnus, Amen, it would help, Thank you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
No one could ever say it enough...perhaps it will sink in...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Perhaps, thank you James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, this brings forth images of the wisdom of 'The Water Babies', except your lanuage is exquisite and your metre is perfect as usual. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
A golden poem of truth. Enjoyed! Deb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, A beautiful coment, thank you. BloomingRose And thank for the read and reply. |
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