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0 posted 2002-05-05 01:45 PM



The warmth of heart then made of ice
a feeling once ‘gain breaking twice
A tear of fall that tumbled down
as lips did curl and bring to frown

Love felt upon the vast of plain
of tumbleweeds and missing rain
Desert winds drying saddened tears
Cast out the heart a thousand fears

Beyond the sea and mountains high
toward a place where bridges lie
A heart in walk and wait of love
a vision born from yon above.

Eyes of gleam that cast a spell
do shine of that they know so well
A vision of a dream of night
beheld by stars, the cosmos bright

Till fires of hearts do warm in glow
and whispers tell of what they know
Love shall journey across the land
in search of maiden’s soft warm hand

[This message has been edited by Magnus (05-05-2002 01:55 PM).]

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Magnus!  Thank you!

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2 posted 2002-05-05 04:09 PM


Yes it shall...James
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3 posted 2002-05-05 04:17 PM


Till fires of hearts do warm in glow
and whispers tell of what they know
Love shall journey across the land
in search of maiden’s soft warm hand
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hark!  Barry!  Doth thou not hear this fair maiden sighing???
Beautiful write as always!
~Searching Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2002-05-05 04:19 PM




(smiles) And may you find all your heart desires happily on your journey, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-05-05 05:45 PM


As always.....a wonderful read. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-05-05 09:11 PM


Magnus...Very well-expressed. Love in search of a fair maiden's hand...classicly romantic.

***Ivy Rose

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7 posted 2002-05-05 09:30 PM


Love felt upon the vast of plain
of tumbleweeds and missing rain--

I was just explaining to JM...(Janet Marie) that once in awhile I read something that makes me say "HELL YES" out loud. (guess who just startled the family again?)

Absolutely loved this...and the two above lines are a poem all by themselves.

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8 posted 2002-05-05 09:34 PM


Kari.... You are very welcome...I think??
Happy that you enjoyed this...

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9 posted 2002-05-05 09:34 PM


JM,  thank you very much as always..
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10 posted 2002-05-05 09:36 PM


Nancy...

Yay Maid of hair so read
I do hear thy sigh from far
Lie thee down upon thy bed
and let thy dreams be afar.

Thank You Nancy...

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11 posted 2002-05-05 09:37 PM


Noah,  as always,  thank you for you ever
flowing regards...

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12 posted 2002-05-05 09:37 PM


Chris,  pleased that you enjoyed this...
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13 posted 2002-05-05 09:38 PM


Ivy Rose,  thanks...you have always been
so gracious to me with my poetry...

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14 posted 2002-05-05 09:39 PM


Serenity....You are a trip!  HELL YES!!

I love that...very pleased you got a charge
from this poem...

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