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Morcastlin
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since 2002-01-14
Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

0 posted 2002-05-03 03:34 PM


"One With You"

Kiss
My
Lips
And
My
Heart

Feel
My
Pulse
Stop
And
Start

Look
In
My
Eyes
To
Find

That
Your
Eyes
Are
In
Mine

Stroke
My
Skin
With
Your
Stare

See
In
Me
The
Same
Care

Love
Me
Now
Make
Me
Whole

Let
Me
Mate
With
Your
Soul.


© Copyright 2002 Bonnie B. Hayes - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-05-03 03:57 PM


Nice presentation. Oh wait, one syllables only? Good job!
Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-05-03 08:09 PM




YAY!!!  Oh Bonnie, this is wonderful, I love it, I love it, you always amaze me with your gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) This would make a wonderful challenge for us all, sweet friend, I think I'm going to try this too, YAY, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

my3monkeytoes
Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze
3 posted 2002-06-02 12:38 PM


Oh
Do
I
Like
this!

Well
Done
And
Per
Fect
Ly!



~Sydney McLean

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