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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2002-05-02 10:12 PM



You Passionate Poets (even your titles inspire… giggle)

today as I read your titles
I thought this sounds like a poem
and it sure was
with a little re-arranging
hope you enjoy….
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just a moment
just a simple Sunday  
in the beginning
once upon a time ago…
the unthinkable place
living on the edge
someday is finally here
someday…again
out of nowhere
back again
hammer of time  
tapping the window
opening the door
new here
a better point of view
escape
so many questions
the mystery of life
sorting through
drifting
how many times have I…
a need to believe in love
the sailing leaf  
falling into the bend of flight
following the wind
the consequence of drifting
ebb and flow
lost in a dream
silent promises…
anticipation
paradise awaits…
love awaits…
look to the sea
sea of love
horizons
where my spirit roams
life- first circling, then spiraling-like a river
off the stones of ocean’s bed
if life were for a second
a flutter of enchantment
promise me
lover’s tool
my life, you’re welcome to it
unchained
comforting to know
wind blow
waiting for you
it is you
only you
gather my spirit
hold my hand…
learning to believe
when you’re near
in poetry
muse of the heart
the breath of imagination
a meeting of the unknown
paper thoughts
paper dreams
catching poetry
a page or two from my heart
silently aloud in unison
words mean so much
of moonlit kisses
midnight’s curl
moonlight dreams
a moment written in the stars
dance of colours
I dance the twinkling
stars don’t hide away
come undone
silence moon
velvet scratches
traces
with fingertips…
whisperings of heart
singing a song
the bottom line
song of joy
two souls together
sunset of poetic phrase
and then came the dawn
night folds
we are day
love touches softly
a letter to the rain
soft rain
let me have your rain
drink water from my lips
essence of sense
peace
with you
a place of warmth and comfort
you gave me new life
heart’s home
three words
                      
Thank you to all the poets listed as titles were used :


sea, mysteria, sunshine, cocobaci, nakdthoughts, sunnyone, larry c, nakdthoughts, mysteria, serenity, christopher, greeneyes, martie, raz, larry c, greeneyes, casanova, muys, nakdthoughts, jamesbowie, magnus, jamesmichael,  sven,  martie, smittenkitten,
christopher, seymour tabin, ctowen & greeneyes, interloper, christopher, interloper, interloper, christopher, hopes, severn, walker, sudhir lyer, saunni, magnus, elizabeth santos, inspiredpoetwriter, titia geertman, poet devine, magicmystery, bill charles, logan, smartchick, nakdthoughts, cocobaci, zinsser, doreen peri, jamesbowie, bill charles, vas, seymour tabin, lucky, nakdthoughts, marge tindal, melissa honeybee, martie,
amister, doreen peri, hopes, jamesmichael, marge tindal, moonlight romeo,
mistletoe angel, mystic mystron, serenity, wayoutwalt, kevin, soleil noir, serenity,
decaflame, sea,  marsha, silver streak, elizabeth santos, kethry, marsha,  auguste,
gentle spirit, martie, dark stranger, elizabeth santos, bsquirrel, jamesbowie, bsquirrel, raz, krissy, rosepetals25, bsquirrel, suetang, suetang,  rosepetals25,  rosepetals25,

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (05-02-2002 10:13 PM).]

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-05-02 10:16 PM


Very creative and well done. ThisDiamond
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-05-02 10:36 PM


OneSlickLady~
That's hard work and you did one heck of a job with it~
Thanks gal~
Delightful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Larry C
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3 posted 2002-05-02 10:52 PM


helen,
Aren't you just a clever girl. Fun...and pleased to make the list. Nice job and lots of work.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

SmittenKitten
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4 posted 2002-05-02 11:00 PM



Helen~  Wow!  I can't believe you came up with this beautiful poem out of such a constricting concept!  I love it!  And I never would have noticed that you used one of my titles had you not mentioned it because this poem just flows so smoothly that it didn't stick out   very very cool poetess.

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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5 posted 2002-05-02 11:04 PM




YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, you always make such magic come alive with the beautiful words you write! (kiss on cheek) I was delighted reading this entire poem based on all of Passions poets titles, sweet friend, this is fantastic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-05-02 11:07 PM


Nicely done Helen,  a lot of work went into
this...thank you for including mine as well.

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7 posted 2002-05-03 01:15 AM


Now that's a neat trick.
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-05-03 06:20 AM


And that lots of poetry...James
Sunshine
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9 posted 2002-05-03 07:13 AM



I see my name included among a fine ensemble...and sometimes, the title says it all...this took a bit of work, and it is apparent, you had a lot of fun!  Thank you for this!

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10 posted 2002-05-03 08:37 AM


Helen~

very humbled to be among your talent......thank you...this is very beatuiful the way you composed all the poets....hugsss


Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-03-2002 08:38 AM).]

Christopher
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11 posted 2002-05-03 12:27 PM


cute - i've thought about doing this with my own poetry before - but never just off the page itself.

and you've made me wonder when the last tiem was that i had four poems on the first page of open forums... it's been a while you can bet!

Christopher

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12 posted 2002-05-03 12:48 PM


Well now, you have done a superb job

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13 posted 2002-05-03 01:11 PM


Very good work.  There's actually a name for this kind of a poem.  It's called a cento, and you've made it your own.  Well done.

Thank you

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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14 posted 2002-05-03 04:36 PM


yes. . . a cento. . . I've been reading about these. . . I like it helen. . .

great work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Elizabeth Santos
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15 posted 2002-05-03 05:02 PM


Oh, This is clever. You must have a ton of patience. ENJOYED THIS MUCH!
LiZ

PS Even the peot pen name's inspire, you slick lady you!

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (05-03-2002 05:37 PM).]

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16 posted 2002-05-03 06:38 PM


This is amazing Helen!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

passing shadows
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17 posted 2002-05-03 10:50 PM


extremely creative! I have often read the titles too, and thought of different things, but never something like what you've come up with here! Wonderful!
wayoutwalt
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18 posted 2002-05-03 11:52 PM


you worked hard on this and the payoff shows... nice job
Magicmystery
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19 posted 2002-05-04 12:20 PM


Ever neat!!!! and ya did manage to fit all our titles together sooooo flawlessly.... It even made sense.  What a sweetheart you are.

Sherry  

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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with you
20 posted 2002-05-04 12:31 PM


wow, as I read, it sounded so poetic, and I like it when moments like this happen and we see it and you've captured it beautifully! It really does flow, very cool. And thank you for including me in there
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