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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2002-05-01 06:23 PM



You'll find me in all different sizes
and colored like a rainbow too.
I may lay low or even high,
sometimes alone,
or share my place with few.
You may see me every day,
but then, sometimes I'm hidden well.
I think that every one of you,
touched me once and smelled my smell.
Sometimes I'm used for unfair game,
but mostly handled with some care.
And in the open countryland,
you can find me anywhere.
You're still puzzling who I am?
I'm not resembling 'ol' Deer's Spam

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-05-01 06:43 PM


Just a question is your letter still and E..I am stumped at the moment but I love the poem. *s
M

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2 posted 2002-05-01 06:54 PM


he he, I got it right?  Nicely done Titia.

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~* Einstein *~

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3 posted 2002-05-01 07:26 PM


Dogonnit! Spam was gonna be my guess! Ok, then, er, blue-humped whale?
Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2002-05-01 07:36 PM



he he I'm not saying anything

blue-humped whale Deer oh dear

Titia (having fun)

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Duncan
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5 posted 2002-05-01 07:58 PM


I've never seen a lamb the colors of the rainbow, so I'll say...a rose, maybe just flowers, in general?
Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2002-05-01 07:59 PM



Nope

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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7 posted 2002-05-02 07:47 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, this is indeed very well crafted and a tricky challenge, I'm going to have to guess a butterfly! (kiss on cheek) This is such a wonderful and difficult challenge, sweet friend, this is so much fun, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Titia Geertman
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8 posted 2002-05-02 07:52 PM



Ahh Noah, you all are so mislead by the rainbowcolors, no, it's not a butterfly, although my subject can be as colorful sometimes.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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9 posted 2002-05-02 08:36 PM


Titia - I have a sweet tooth to-night and am thinking ..... Easter Eggs?!!!!!! Whatever you have written about....it is delightful. lol. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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10 posted 2002-05-02 09:12 PM


Tulips?...Yup, I think it's tulips....
Even though my sister says Easter eggs.

Duncan
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11 posted 2002-05-02 09:47 PM


I think that every one of you,
touched me once and smelled my smell.

See, this is the part that's throwing me.  Gimme another hint, PLEASE!!!!

Titia Geertman
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12 posted 2002-05-03 03:00 AM



Nightshade got it right
Egg it was

Sorry Duncan, too late for another clue now.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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13 posted 2002-05-03 10:09 AM


Well Titia! I have read this over and over again. You are very good at this. I give up. I was going to say an elk or and eagle. but I don't think that either one of those are right. Good challenge, Titia.
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14 posted 2002-05-03 02:08 PM



Muys
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15 posted 2002-05-03 02:27 PM


Crazy daugter
who was furst
egg or chicken?
knuffel  
Mom

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16 posted 2002-05-03 04:33 PM


great job Titia. . . I almost forgot what object I gave you myself. . . LOL

these are fun, aren't they??  they make you choose your words carefully and find other ways to look at the world. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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