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Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
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0 posted 2002-04-29 09:19 PM


Your love - inspired by doreen peri's poem, "God wants more poetry...."

I'm captured by my gift of poetry
All I do now, somehow is write for you
Why must I write and write? I am not free?
I cannot rest; I'm filled with zest, gee.

What good are stars when lonely fingers are
Typing on a keyboard making words and lines?
How am I free, to see, feel, I'm in a jar
Of magnetic bits, fits, lost, no sunshine?

I speak of love, above but love requires
Two souls aglow, in loving ecstasy
List'ning to music of heavenly choirs
With time to touch and feel tenderly.

Where are my melodies; where are roses?
Where are my moonlit nights; where are delights?
Where are my hugs and laughter, cute noses?
Why must my day be gone to write in night?

I need a lift, not a gift, poetry
I need your love from above deep in me.

Your love.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
April 29, 2002

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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2002-05-01 10:21 AM



love can be found in typing, but there comes a point where the human spirit needs the closeness of our special loved one......yes, I think you said this beautifully!

The music is playing...the dance begins
  
    


Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-05-01 10:58 AM


Thank you, Sunnyone. I agree.

((Sunnyone))
-Newell

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Muys
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since 2002-04-06
Posts 389
The Netherlands
3 posted 2002-05-01 11:17 AM


Dear Mister Silver Streak ,
Most writers are alone,  you are right "but you have so many friends, the whole world see your poems, you have not write for nothing.
There are so many poemmakers, you can not answer all.
I am a dutch lady, 90 years, will you have
consideration with me, for my gramar.
Thank you.
You can smile now.
I love you
Muys
  

[This message has been edited by Muys (05-01-2002 06:35 PM).]

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God's love
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