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Open Poetry #20

a lesson

JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2002-04-29 09:06 AM

they are a mystery to me
the blossoms of early spring
to turn their back so quickly
on a hard and sorrowful winter

much forgiveness must nature instill
in these simple flowers
perhaps God does understand
what he puts us through

no, it is what we put ourselves through
taking responsibility for things
forcing others to feel the same
when what we need is forgiveness

and understanding will come
shining and bright
breaking over your life
bringing with it a new day

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-04-29 09:09 AM

James,
and understanding will come
shining and bright
breaking over your life
bringing with it a new day

And I'm sure it will, enjoyed

JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

2 posted 2002-04-29 09:19 AM

thanks seymour, you always take time to reply to my writing and I just wanted to let you know I appreciate that.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2002-04-29 04:13 PM

*sigh*
Exactly....always did love your writing. Love the comparison.

*jenn*

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-04-29 05:27 PM

Powerful and heartfelt.

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