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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-04-28 05:49 PM



“BED OF SWEETNESS”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Close your eyes, dream,
for soft is my hand…
To caress, enchant you,
into my fairyland…

Touching gentle places,
with your delight…
Whispers into your ear,
guiding you into night…

Warmth of a woman,
embracing in arms…
On display you are,
enchanting charms…

Bed of sweetness,
love I’ll teach…
Moments like this,
ones you’ll beseech…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-04-28 06:02 PM


very tender teacher  you would be Bill

hugss
M

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-04-28 06:16 PM


I appreciate this warmth of a woman...James
Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-04-28 06:31 PM


Touching gentle places,
with your delight…
Whispers into your ear,
guiding you into night…

Great poem, Bill.
I love the romance in it.
~hugs~

Lyra

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4 posted 2002-04-28 07:24 PM


"Close your eyes, dream,
for soft is my hand…
To caress, enchant you,
into my fairyland…"




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I wish for the magic of true love to forever sing in your heart! (big hugggsssss) This is fantastic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-04-28 07:37 PM


This is lovely, Bill. Feels happy and sensuous.
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-04-28 09:07 PM


Yet another soft, tender and passionately
written piece of excellence....Nice one
BC...

Mag.

SmartChick
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7 posted 2002-04-28 11:05 PM


Very nice Bill!
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8 posted 2002-04-28 11:32 PM


Bill,
Well done...and James wasn't lying you know!

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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