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Open Poetry #20

Seeds To Fruition

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-04-27 09:06 AM

Seeds To Fruition

Each day awakens
Page white and new
Should I write for me
Shall I write for you

Do you read my lips
Or imagine my face
The emotional being
Emerging this space

Gypsy in the woods
Dancing tree to tree
Surrounds of ocean
Mermaid of the sea

At the early stages
What shall be seen
Am I young or old
Or there inbetween

The seed to fruition
Takes time to grow
Words upon pages
Are like an embryo

Breaking out a shell
Imagining or reality
Reading of thoughts
Do you envisage me

Hope

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

1 posted 2002-04-27 09:21 AM

HopeS~
this is delightful, very visual and a very lovely read. Enjoyed very much
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2002-04-27 09:26 AM

Thanks for your kind reply Tracie
Yes I thought while jotted down notes ,
poems are like seeds the mind plants then hopes to grow
Hope

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-04-27 12:49 PM

(smiles) Yes, yes, poems are like seeds, and may we always nurture them dearly to our hearts and let our heart speak and help them sprout into a masterpiece from the ultimate poet! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-04-27 12:52 PM

Hope....I do agree....seeds planted,
waiting for them to grow...You have done
this well, and now it is time to sprinkle
a little water and love on them..

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

5 posted 2002-04-27 12:53 PM

I love this! I also noticed the last verse is an acrostic...BIRD. Maybe just a subconcious Freudian slip, but maybe not. Either way a beautiful piece.

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