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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-03-01 04:37 PM


Making Love

Every word she says.
Every move she makes.
Every kiss she shares.
Every step she takes.
Brings her closer to me
and the love we'll make.

JamesLee
March01
2003

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-03-01 04:52 PM


Words dancing towards fulfilling ...
Great!
Margherita

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2 posted 2003-03-01 04:54 PM




(sigh) Oh James, this is lovely, sweet friend, I love the anticipation of this, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-03-01 07:58 PM


James - ah yes, nice...

BC

J. K. Mitchell
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since 2002-01-12
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GA
4 posted 2003-03-01 08:03 PM


Enticing

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27
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Cincinnati, Ohio, USA
5 posted 2003-03-01 08:03 PM


Love the poem.  Kind of reminds me of the song by the Police - I'll Be Watching You (every breath you take)
the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
6 posted 2003-03-01 08:04 PM


Yes enticing........

Cold hands means a warm heart

Dark Kisses
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Flat lands of Kansas
7 posted 2003-03-01 08:11 PM


Nice!!!

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

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