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ben_pelling
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0 posted 2003-03-01 02:38 AM



As we meet under the shade of spring,
In a world of complete wonderings,
I look at myself just who am I,
From a world of wealth that reaches the sky,

But I drop to my kness for before me is a dream,
Of the most beautiful girl I have ever seen,
How can I imagine when her image is real,
How speechless I am, amazed at her still,

She comes from a world where pleasures are simple,
Where the wealth she holds is so very little,

And I would give all that I can,
But what can I give, one wealthy man,
All the power and money I possess,
Cannot show her my love and tenderness,

As I see in her smile now I know why,
She has everything that money can't buy.


(here you go you wanted some of my own work well here it is was up all night writting it)

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rkcraig
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1 posted 2003-03-01 03:05 AM


Good job Ben.  I wish that money could by happiness, sometimes it can't, what am I saying?  Life would be so much better if I had a million or two.  

The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-03-01 03:19 AM


good stuff! I love this!
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3 posted 2003-03-01 03:28 AM


Yes, Ben. I knew you could do it. This is wonderful....
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Hugs,
Ethel

ben_pelling
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4 posted 2003-03-01 05:10 PM


I'm glad you liked it =)
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