Silence Is So Hard To Bear

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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-02-28 08:23 AM

Silence Is Hard To Bear

Why am I feeling this way
So depressed and sad
You never said goodbye
Or closed what we had

I suppose its the silence
Of nothing being spoken
That leaves me in tears
So sad and heartbroken

Heart sorrow lamenting
As my emotions outpour
Gentle words that touch
In needing nothing more

Your barrier came down
With a long silent pause
In preventing me access
Still I know not the cause

Lonliness and confusion
With feelings of despair
Maybe you never realise
Silence is so hard to bear

In my impassioned plea
Every loving word I send
Convince me its not over
For I cannot write the end

Hope©2003

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-02-28 09:32 AM

that shattering silence, the loudest thud on the heart,
been there, feel the pain

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2003-02-28 10:45 AM

Thank you inkgoddess for your kind reply and understanding
Hope

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2003-02-28 12:12 PM

Hope, I share this feelings with you. You have express these feelings so beautifully.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-02-28 12:25 PM

I am afraid there are far too many of us who have felf such pain.....but the sun does shine again!

Warm hugs,
EA

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-02-28 01:08 PM

great write Hope! I know exactly how you feel! The "ending" is perfect for the piece...hugs to you friend

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-02-28 08:37 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I don't think any of us could ever bear to write the end! (sad sigh) This is heartaching, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-03-01 04:28 AM

I know that people say that silence says a lot, but it also says very little...I allow my feelings to start changing accordingly when I get silence...James

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2003-03-01 05:01 AM

Thank you dear poet friends for your kind understandin replies , we have highs and lows , I guess this is one of those low times
Hope

Lisann
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since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

9 posted 2003-03-01 03:11 PM

sometimes silence speaks louder than words.........and can be twice as painful. You've written my thoughts about a relationship in my life with this piece. Well done.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2003-03-02 08:42 PM

To quote Jackson Browne~
(my theme song somedays)

"I'm just one or two years and couple of changes behind you, in my lessons of love's pain and the heart ache school"

Silence might be golden but I'm not buying it.

Enjoyed your poem Hope~

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