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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-02-27 10:19 PM


From the way you say,
"I love you."
To the way you smile
To that beer belly
I saw in the last picture
You sent me
Your perfect to me

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
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1 posted 2003-02-27 10:25 PM


Yes, perfection is in the eyes of the beholder.  I believe too many people place outter beauty as the top qualities.  Yet its the inner beauty that makes them the person they are!!

Nice thoughts here,
~Dark~

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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2 posted 2003-02-27 10:36 PM


To call me perfect it'd take an angel. This proves that Julie's even better than any angel.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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3 posted 2003-02-27 11:33 PM




(sigh) Oh Julie, this is wonderful, sweet friend, and may that smile and wink of an eye always glimmer to you in the picture, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-02-27 11:37 PM


Darn, you've got a pretty laugh! Wanna hear it more often!

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5 posted 2003-02-28 04:27 AM


good write
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