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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-27 04:24 PM



Taking My Time

would I
miss you
if you
fell in
cracks wind
could not
blow to
or
below oceans
I could
not swim
for now
I’ll not
worry
I will
just enjoy

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-27 04:27 PM


It is always good to take your time. I really enjoyed this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-02-27 04:37 PM


cracks wind could not blow to....

like that line.. nicely done..


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3 posted 2003-02-27 08:09 PM




(smiles) Yes, enjoy the ocean view and when the chinook winds die out, you are free to venture forth and not worry about leaping in the drink! (kiss on cheek) This is splendid, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krawdad
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4 posted 2003-02-27 08:19 PM


h
i will just enjoy . . .
:-)
(rather creative, this)
e

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-02-28 04:41 AM


yes...I know how it is
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