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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-02-26 09:50 PM





Some days

She is better
than a bubble bath…

a hug, on two legs,
lifting up into a bend over,

she is champagne, in fur…

she is
hide my face
and whisper

unconditional…
everything….

Abby in motion…

if I had to put her
into haiku…

love encapsulates
dig your hands into my fur
canine understood


out of haiku?

She loves.


A side note?

Hello, Annie….

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-26 09:55 PM


This is so sweet.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Nan
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2 posted 2003-02-26 09:59 PM


Well - She's just adorable... and every word is teeming with love here, Sunshine...
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3 posted 2003-02-26 10:03 PM



Our "pup" had surgery today...she is a gifted lady...energy to spare, if her body parts will keep up with her...we are not "whole" without her...she keeps the heart of our home ticking...., thanks...

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4 posted 2003-02-26 11:18 PM


What a beautiful dog, Karilea. Our animals give us so much pleasure.
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5 posted 2003-02-27 01:55 AM



What a lovely and loving write, Karilea.
She, and your words, are beautiful.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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6 posted 2003-02-27 04:22 PM


Karilea--She looks like she smells pretty too..and silky.  Love the love in this!
scorpio
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7 posted 2003-02-27 04:29 PM


I hope her surgery was a success and she's up and running around...give her a pat for me..

believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2003-02-27 08:39 PM


Lovely Karilea..
I know about pets and them being the center of the family...
Hope she is feeling better today!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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9 posted 2003-02-27 09:29 PM


I know just where you're coming from...

Warm hugs to you both!
Linda

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10 posted 2003-02-28 04:30 AM


great stuff! I love it!
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11 posted 2003-02-28 06:11 AM


bow wow...enjoyed...James
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12 posted 2003-02-28 06:17 AM



Abby had a good night in her own bed...she's hobbling around pretty well, but eating fine, and wagging her tail when it doesn't knock her off balance!

Thanks for enjoying our pup with us...

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13 posted 2003-02-28 09:27 PM


nice
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14 posted 2003-02-28 09:38 PM


AAAWWW, Karilea, I know exactly what you mean about your "pup". She is so cute and lovable looking. I'm glad to hear that she's doing good and was able to sleep in her own bed last night.

Our little animals are more understanding of us than some people are at times, aren't they?

Hugs,
Ethel

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