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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-02-26 05:13 PM

I sit here
Waiting to hear your
Handsome voice once again

I wait for you to call
So we can talk
And see how things are going
To see if everyone's alright

Get caught up
On the things
That we don't get a chance
To talk about online
The night before

When I got off the phone
With you a couple days ago
All I could think
Is my love
When shall you call again

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2003-02-26 05:49 PM

You know what I like even more than your poetry? I enjoy watching you grow and deepen as a writer. That's happening, and I can see it in just the month that I've been here.

Do you feel it? You should.

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Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

2 posted 2003-02-26 06:36 PM

Very nice. I liked it a lot. I can really relate, having someone so dear be online, wishing only to hear his handsome voice over the phone. Great!
Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

3 posted 2003-02-26 08:28 PM

You'll hear my voice again Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-02-26 08:29 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I can understand the yearning, sweet friend, fear not for he was gone before on hiatuses, but he did call you and believe me, it'll happen again in no time! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-02-27 07:57 AM

I agree with Ratleader, Julie.
Your poems are very beautiful and your writing has improved greatly.
Hugss
M

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2003-02-27 10:45 AM

Julie,

I am so glad I took the time to read this.

You captured what many feel, just waiting until the next encounter.

Ed and Maureen are right. Additionally even your replies to other poetry have matured, with your insightful opinions.

You are definitely blossoming.

Enjoying these changes, Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-02-27 10:57 AM

the_loner_23
A lovely poem, enjoyed.

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

8 posted 2003-02-27 11:28 AM

I feel what you say
I have worn those shoes
wait I am still wearing them

Nice write
Thomas

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-02-27 01:18 PM

patience is a virtue...yada yada yada...blah, blah, blah

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-02-27 04:45 PM

When shall you call again...James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2003-02-27 05:57 PM

Julie, I have read this again..I wish you had chosen this for the book submission. I do think it's that good *s
hugss
M

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-02-27 06:01 PM

Thank you all for your replies.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2003-02-27 06:07 PM

I love how you so openly share your thoughts and feelings---and your love life! tehe It is like reading someone's diary with their permission!
I saw ThunderMage's reply and that was good to see! Was it not?!?

Have a wonderful evening!
Linda

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

14 posted 2003-02-27 06:17 PM

you ask for the reponses to be truthful
so I'll try...

I've read your offering here for quite some time and have seen you grow in depth and in how you present your words... I've enjoyed watching that process and respect the honesty you put into your words...

nice thoughts here... and the waiting for a phone to ring and become once again connected with a person on the other end..can be an endless heartbreak... only relived when it finally does ring and you hear a voice on the other end say

"hello, it me."

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