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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2003-02-25 01:45 PM


Lift your chin
There's another petal on the bloom
Another chance for love, my love
And soon,
You'll dream a garden
Perennial


Rf

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Minister Joe
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since 2003-02-22
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1 posted 2003-02-25 01:58 PM


Robert,

I very much like the image of love as a garden--and since this work is so succint--perhaps you could do a series of short poems, regarding the love/garden/flowering theme.

Thank you for sharing thing,

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

Decaflame
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2 posted 2003-02-25 01:59 PM



Brevity fits you
like a fine suit, Robert...

Robert Frazier
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3 posted 2003-02-25 02:26 PM


Matt,  thanks for the kind words and solicitation!

Rf

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