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Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

0 posted 2003-02-15 08:11 PM

I sail upon the sea
Of loves eternity
I pray on bended knee
She will return to me

An empty shell which pumps my blood
that courses through my veins
I sail the raft of loves that past
In search of her fair name

I will be loyal and pledge my love
And promise to be true
I swear to all that I hold dear
That no one else will do

To my suprise my task is filled
I finally have found you
Upon your raft of love you sail
In search of me were you

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

1 posted 2003-02-15 09:03 PM

You have a beautiful talent. The flow and power in your writing is deeply moving. Wonderful read, as usual!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

2 posted 2003-02-15 09:06 PM

Thank you koko. I am blushing....

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-15 10:16 PM

I just love your poetry. it is so full of love and warmth.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

4 posted 2003-02-15 10:18 PM

Thank you Loner! Love and warmth are the light of the world in my eyes. Of course GOD is FIRST, but God is love is He not?

:-)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-02-15 11:37 PM

(smiles) Oh Albert, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as I'd love to sail with my love and can only imagine how gorgeous the feeling must be! (big hugggssssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

6 posted 2003-02-16 12:29 PM

Thank you Noah!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-02-16 03:31 AM

great stuff

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2003-02-16 05:43 AM

I could feel the swell of the waves and hear the call of the birds, in this vivid piece.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

9 posted 2003-02-17 06:18 PM

Thank you PASSING and KETHRY

*BLUSHING

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