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ctowen
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0 posted 2003-02-24 07:56 AM


A moment of time,
an excruciating rush
ending beginnings

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-02-24 12:20 PM


this aches
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-24 01:06 PM


I can feel the pain. This is a good poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ctowen
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3 posted 2003-02-24 01:59 PM


In a blink of an eye ....
   the whole world can change.

      Sometimes for the "good",
         though mostly painfully so.

    Ever try not to blink while staring at nothing?

       Thank you for the comments.

regards2you
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4 posted 2003-02-24 02:43 PM



Isn't it odd how so many views can be seen by various people.

I see this as very positive. A finally, ~it~ is going to happen....


Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

ctowen
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5 posted 2003-02-24 02:55 PM


Thank you, Pat.
   I try to write in a way that every reader
     can see themselves in the words ...
        I am glad to see you.

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6 posted 2003-02-24 03:00 PM


Excellent! Ever notice just how much you can miss in a blink? Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

ctowen
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7 posted 2003-02-24 03:34 PM


Absolutely ... I almost missed you!
   Thanks Chris.

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8 posted 2003-02-24 05:10 PM


kiss of a snowflake
licking an icecream cone,
loves fleeting moments

ctowen
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9 posted 2003-02-25 11:29 AM


to melt in one's mouth
suffocating tendencies
breathless in your hands

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