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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-02-23 08:08 PM

Ticket ends before the required destination

desire to be home

rides paramount over fears of harm

pacing the wait

stepping over cold and into numb

tears alarm

my racing pulse of childlike panic

scoop me up

offer instant releif like mother

I'm still stranded

blind navigation circles my eyes map

clawed in the lost night

by my own illogical thoughts.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-23 08:12 PM

Enjoyed.

.. Its just... hmmmm...

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-23 08:51 PM

Enjoyed this read very much

Cold hands means a warm heart

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

3 posted 2003-02-23 10:16 PM

interestingly wierd. reminds me kind of when in alice through the looking-glass, alice is on the train and her confusion over tickets that can't be bought but are needed.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-02-23 10:39 PM

Gemma, anothe poem that
made me ponder my thoughts...
Very interesting.....

Heart hugs,
Ethel Mae

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2003-02-24 10:44 AM

Gemma,

Enjoyed this and your mind, as this says much, and I recognize the concepts. I think it creative.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-02-24 10:48 AM

gemjop
The symbols will unfold as time goes on, enjoyed.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2003-02-24 10:49 AM

Very thought provoking.

Susan

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2003-02-24 05:36 PM

the last line indeed summs up a great deal of the whole...

I enjoyed.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2003-02-24 05:40 PM

So very creative and full of depth.
Thanks,
Eric

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