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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-02-23 09:21 AM



And There It Was...

The right moment, in your eyes.
I saw it, you couldn't deny it,
the spark of yours sent to mine
that traveled until it reached my heart,
the touch of eyes, that made me smile.

~~*~~

That feeling, I can't escape,
whenever I see you,
my breath catches in a hold,
my mind plays out a silent movie
as I talk to myself trying to settle
the butterflies within.

~~*~~

That touch, the one that turned my head,
lifting my face to yours, a kiss in the want,
so tempting, and knowing it was time,
(my time) to feel again,
the love I had been missing.
M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-23-2003 10:13 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-02-23 10:42 AM


Beautiful, M!  Love the feel of this one.
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2 posted 2003-02-23 11:13 AM


Very good, Maureen...Hey, I've been missing you...
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Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-02-23 11:22 AM


This is so beautiful. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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4 posted 2003-02-23 12:50 PM


wow! hope this is true to life...you certainly deserve all the love you can hold in your heart, and more
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