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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-02-22 09:05 PM



Times



Winds blew over time
Soft dresses covered all then
Iron clad worked jeans
Beans to table corn bread warm
Still the water came to us



New sounds of sleek whoosh
Star wars model replace aged
Sands of time still grind
Powers ours ~ behold the wind
Lessons go ~ misunderstood



© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-02-22 09:14 PM


Karilea--The power of the wind remains the same...everything else changes.  Loved the thought in this.  
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2 posted 2003-02-22 10:01 PM


I really liked this one.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ecrivan
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3 posted 2003-02-22 10:18 PM


if we could appreciate the power of these 'natural' elements more...thanks Karilea


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4 posted 2003-02-22 10:20 PM


progress cold and true
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5 posted 2003-02-22 11:04 PM


Ecrivan...that we could...

Aenimal....we we should!

Thanks...to all that read...

we could gather so much, but for the red tape

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-22-2003 11:07 PM).]

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6 posted 2003-03-06 02:37 AM


a superb contrast. great post.

-majnu
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7 posted 2003-03-06 03:52 AM


nice job :-)
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8 posted 2003-03-06 11:53 AM


this is lovely!

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9 posted 2003-03-06 12:01 PM


nicely done...
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