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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You whisper to me in a voice felt fully of desire - " Do not respond to this kiss...simply melt to the touch of my lips." And I dissolve in you. You tell me, " I am a taste of all you have ever longed for." And I ask you for a feast. You ask me, "Are we dreaming?" And I only close my eyes. There is no need to answer. We know. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Congratulations on your 400th post, Eric...and thank you once again...if you keep this up, we're going to have to name a Romance Forum after you! |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Wow... what an incredible, beautiful poem. And what a perfect ending! You are so blessed with such a Divine gift...the true music of love flows through your veins... and you dance upon that sacred breath, singing pure beauty for our hearts to dance with... Thank you... for sharing such an amazing, profound poem. Love, Moca [This message has been edited by cinnamongirl (02-22-2003 11:10 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as your words always seem to whisper with love that truly does melt the heart! (big hugggsssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oh! Oh, Call the paramedics I think my heart just stopped with wonder. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A true feast for the spirit and the senses .... Love, Margherita |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Well, fanning self, you have melted this girl's heart. excellent excellent write. wow. ever deep...runs |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ericc,This Is very nice always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...aw, so loverly...so very, very loverly... Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
'we know' i love this thought, and the feeling mutual 'knowing' brings. sigh.....bliss, Ericc, another fiiine poem.  lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Eric, Simply smiling here.....such a complete love poem in so few words. Yes, it is in the knowing.... Enjoyed greatly, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
who stole my reply? *scratching head* I could sware that I replied to this fine write, I enjoyed |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
perfect |
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