To Marge, my double hearted friend

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Open Poetry #25

To Marge, my double hearted friend

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

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0 posted 2003-02-21 03:03 PM

~*to Marge*~

time                      it is
to write            this song
for Marge my lovely friend
because I know that from
her heart it's only love
she sends. That's why
dear Marge this
little heart is
given by me
to you
dear      gal      smile
my friend            for I love
you to pieces, and if the sun's
not shining and clouds are
what we see, then think
of me, the dutchie lass
smiling braided me
because we are
true friends
always
will
be

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (02-21-2003 03:12 PM).]

Sunshine

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1 posted 2003-02-21 03:05 PM

Titia! You're becoming quite gifted in the presentation of your poems...and I enjoy your photography as well! Thank you! This suits Marge to a T!

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

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2 posted 2003-02-21 04:44 PM

Wow...the words and the presentation are wonderful!
Eric

cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02

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3 posted 2003-02-21 05:52 PM

Wow... great presentation! Lovely poem!! I've never seen anything done like this before- how creative!

THANK YOU!

Love,
Moca

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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4 posted 2003-02-21 07:15 PM

just beautiful Titia.
Love the presentation,
but mostly your heart
hugs
M

SmartChick
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5 posted 2003-02-21 07:26 PM

Wow Titia! I love the way you did this. And, I know Marge will love it too.

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2003-02-21 07:42 PM

Thanks, I know she will like it.
Just playing around with form and words.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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7 posted 2003-02-22 10:54 AM

Titia~
Sometimes ... the presentation of YOUR heart just blows me away .... this is one of those times, sweet lady~

Totally enchanting ..... you is just da' bestest of da' bestest !
*Huglets* and great big thank you's too~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-02-22 11:23 AM

Titia,
Could not be nicer, enjoyed.

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