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Elan
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State of Wide Eye

0 posted 2003-02-21 10:43 AM



I am his
Lady Élan,

A nick of name

He sees
Elegance

Even in my denial.

He trusts
My flight

Though, he said,
Icarus, you are not
And shall never be.

He is profound
In his
Pedantry.

He would be Daedalus,
He is art…

If a brush
Or nib
Might be graceful,
Refined, with a slender,
Sophisticated air,

That would be
How he sees me.

I am not,
Nor ever shall be
Any of those things,

Still, I am pleased
To be his

Lady Élan.


© Copyright 2003 Elan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-21 10:55 AM


nicely done Elan... I enjoyed
Goldboat
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2 posted 2003-02-21 11:03 AM


Good!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-02-21 11:17 AM


And you are our Lady Elan...
So pleased to see you here today!
~Hugs & Smiles,Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

regards2you
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4 posted 2003-02-21 01:33 PM




What a treasure. Enjoyed this.
Pat

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        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2003-02-21 01:36 PM




(smiles) Yes, and you are also our dear friend Elan, who truly possesses some of the reminding beauty of the great painters and poets! (big hugggsssss) You can be anything in your imagination and make it real, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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