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Grief
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Grief |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
A soul holds unknown colors, an Artistry in all manner of enigmatical majesty… Yet vibrant hues, unseen, slip by Earthly eyes shrouded; For the depth of prickly desperation still resides in numb skies inside, Reversing an abiding Love’s eternity with one death’s tide… a churning tide in time with Armageddon’s rhyme. The phoenix shall rise from ash’s shackling abomination, And sands shall sift to reveal restless bones of rage’s insatiable consummation; The dominion of every tomb now lays bare, lingering of spirits crossed, though still wrought there. Quaking tempers toss thunders aside- All this madness merely escapes, for the soliloquy of One heart’s rhythm remains- Of strained ears awaiting, bated, Listening to God’s promise pass, Unscathed, Through scorned shadows, Lurking. |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
This is good, an odd feeling of melancholic divinity, have some |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the ending...good write altogether |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enjoyed your writing as usual. Another interesting journey via your fascinating mind! Warm hugs, EA |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
keep re-reading this one. its addictive. find something new in it every time i re read.  breathtaking and excellently written. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
 COOL! thank you. |
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