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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-02-20 07:35 AM


Rows of goes in throws of snows
Piled beneath the drifts of blows
Blight of white from sightless night
That mechanized man lost it’s fight
Winds that sends and ends pretends
That only muscle power moving lends
Creep through deep till sleep will keep
Giving winter the control of the street.

Gloom
just playing with words
as I rest my tired old body from combat with the remnants
of the Storm of the Century



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Spiros Zafiris
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1 posted 2003-02-20 07:53 AM


..Professor Gloom../\..i enjoy reading your

poems; this one too../\..Spiros


---------------trees---

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-02-20 07:59 AM



Sometimes there are advantages
to wishing we could just be a bear,
curl up, hibernate,
let nature course through,
by spring melt...
smell the honey...

smiling here, Professor...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-02-20 08:03 AM


Professor,
Enjoyed your play on words.

Professor Gloom
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4 posted 2003-02-20 09:02 AM


Thank you, Spiros Zafiris,
Pleased you enjoyed

Thank you, Sunshine,
Glad you liked,
But I think I can bear the winter a while longer
since I have no other choice

Thank you, Seymour
Always a pleasure to see your response

Gloom

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-02-20 12:49 PM


hugs to you
regards2you
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6 posted 2003-02-20 01:36 PM



Professor,

I like when you play with words; like brain food for me. Great writing!


Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Sunshine
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7 posted 2003-02-20 01:45 PM



LOL...



Professor Gloom
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8 posted 2003-02-20 02:23 PM


Thank you, passing shadows,
For your kindness

Thank you, regards2you,
Since you enjoyed these
I’ll post a few more for you to think upon

Thank you, Sunshine
Again

Gloom

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