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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-02-19 04:36 PM



Nude to the tip of my eyes reach

sound

of sweeping hand meets my ear

you smooth the imperfections in my life

our different skin

locks

like our every morning

as light slides along wall as hours pass

and i know

they mean nothing

i wait in sleep

tender

were the moments as we woke.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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Aenimal
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1 posted 2003-02-19 09:49 PM


Why in the hell no one has replied to this is beyond me. Absolutely beautiful words gemma back to the top with you
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-19 11:09 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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3 posted 2003-02-20 12:15 PM


Well, Gemma, just in case you're wondering, I haven't replied because I was off of the computer when you posted. I always look for your poems. I like all of yours and this is no exception.  
(Psssst!! Did you have fun last weekend?
I hope so.... )

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~  
                  

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-02-20 03:33 AM


gemma, I really like this one
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