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D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-04-12 06:20 AM

In one moment
Things can end,
In another
Wasted,
Yet another,
Create the bond
Of a lifetime.

A masterpiece,
Can be created
So quick,
Or take a lifetime
To accomplish.

In words like this,
They can create
Wandering thoughts,
Creating images
Of bouquets so different,
The originality of creativity
Will never be cloned
From similar views.

No two people,
Will occupy the same image
Unless helmets are strapped
To a recording.
Yet eyes will focus
On different things,
Seeing things so different
As to be a unique person.

I take a moment
Of reflection
From the gem of life,
Sparkling clarity,
A treasure
Of independent meditation.
For at any time
The mind can mist
Into a fantastic rainbow
Of self worth.

So here a poet,
Took letters,
Forming words,
Into lines
Of verses in,
Just a moment.

Thought: My name may ring clear or may be hidden in a fog, for that does not matter, as creating the image for you to meditate from.

Thought: I take letters forming words from a mind confused, as readers absorb my puzzle I gain clarity to get more confused. Some day this will make sense to you and leave me dumb founded.

D.Lester Young (04/10/03)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-04-13 12:41 PM

Lester - hehehe

this was fabulous here:

For at any time
The mind can mist
Into a fantastic rainbow
Of self worth.

what insight xxoo

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-04-13 05:52 AM

"So here a poet,
Took letters,
Forming words,
Into lines
Of verses in,
Just a moment."

And the poet did it beautifully.
Well done, D.Lester...much enjoyed.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2003-04-13 09:53 AM

and the moments can make such a difference in our lives...we never know from one moment to the next. I love the uniqueness of this poem, and how it is tailored to individual readers!! Bravo!!

Somehow, my puter recorded this twice, but no matter...I don't mind if you don't!!!

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (04-13-2003 09:55 AM).]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2003-04-13 09:54 AM

and the moments can make such a difference in our lives...we never know from one moment to the next. I love the uniqueness of this poem, and how it is tailored to individual readers!! Bravo!! The check is in the box!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2003-04-13 10:33 AM

Dave,

Loved this; from the unique of you to the unique of me....

Great thinking!

Enjoyed,
Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-04-13 10:38 AM

enjoy

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

7 posted 2003-04-13 09:04 PM

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