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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-02-19 10:36 AM



Dragons dance in erotic embrace
as serpentine toungues intertwine
igniting primevil flames of passion
which had for so long been cold.
Fires purges black coal
to sparkling diamond
a star,
a beacon of hope
in the dark night
for the lost dreams
of loveless souls
who now wander alone
can find thier soulmate.
As dragon fire fills the night sky
when love crazed dragons embrance
under the blanket of night.

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-02-19 10:53 AM


Hmmmmmmm...certainly gives hope and something to think about.  

Loved this, give me more please!

Susan

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2 posted 2003-02-19 11:07 AM


thank you for reading
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-02-19 02:17 PM


Enjoyed...James
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4 posted 2003-02-19 02:18 PM


beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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5 posted 2003-02-19 03:35 PM


very nice
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6 posted 2003-02-19 05:06 PM



Like this a lot. Great, magical fantasy.

These lines are favorites and sentiment very touching:

".....a star
a beacon of hope
in the dark night
for the lost dreams
of loveless souls
who now wander alone
can find their soulmate"


Enjoyed, Pat

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7 posted 2003-02-20 04:19 AM


enjoyed this write
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