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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-02-19 01:21 AM


My mind is the anvil
Where I hammer you all
Into bits ,Into pieces
Of all that you are.

My heart is the prison
Where I hold who you are
All the bits and the pieces
That got you this far

My hand brings the veangance
You'd thought never come
My eyes saw the secrets
That were hidden so long

My eyes saw the coward
My mind saw his lies
My hands brought the justice
The heart never lies

Another early piece I dug up,since I seem to be stuck for writing new stuff last few days.
Jason

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-02-19 01:42 AM


wow...very honest and raw write
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-19 01:37 PM


I love honesty. So therefore I like this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-02-19 01:43 PM


time has been kind to these words, new or old they hold their power still, excellent write

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (02-19-2003 01:43 PM).]

Brad Majors
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Georgia
4 posted 2003-02-19 01:59 PM


powerful piece!
SPIRIT
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5 posted 2003-02-21 12:47 PM


Like this - great write and honest.
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