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Albert J. Allie
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0 posted 2003-02-18 07:12 PM


Fear not the callous day,
For I shall attend thee.
And dread not the closing of it's eye,
For I shall give you refuge,
From it's gloom.
Walk with me along the path,
That leads to devotion everlasting.
That of which thy heart
Craves in great abundance
And we shall dance
In the palm of loves hand,
Without hinderance.

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1 posted 2003-02-18 07:52 PM


strange I read this..and thought of the lords prayer...

perhaps because it is aprayer of sorts...

enjoyed

Albert J. Allie
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2 posted 2003-02-18 07:55 PM


Yes it came out kind of biblical sounding didn't it??
Thank you!

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3 posted 2003-02-18 08:16 PM




(smiles) Ole! And may each dance be better than the last, this is gorgeous, I too felt that spiritual side of the poem, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Albert J. Allie
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4 posted 2003-02-18 08:17 PM


Thank you Noah! LOVED that Picture!!!!!!!
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5 posted 2003-02-18 08:53 PM


Albert,


"Dance in the palm of love's hand"

Nice. I like this.


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Albert J. Allie
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6 posted 2003-02-18 09:09 PM


thank you pat!!!!!!!!

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7 posted 2003-02-19 05:24 AM


Fantastic...James
Albert J. Allie
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8 posted 2003-02-19 06:49 PM


THANKS JAMES!!!!!!!
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9 posted 2003-02-19 09:49 PM


Oh my Albert...You always pen such beautiful words!
~hugs~
Lauren

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Albert J. Allie
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10 posted 2003-02-19 10:28 PM


Thank you Lauren. I smile knowing you like my work. See? ~~>
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11 posted 2003-02-20 04:02 AM


enjoyed
Albert J. Allie
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12 posted 2003-02-20 08:38 AM


Thanks Shadow!!!
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