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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
If only you would listen If you would just take the time… Look and see that there’s a reason And to this life there is a rhyme Rivers do not have a choice, To flow or stop in their tracks But we have been given a chance To color life white or black You’ve got a pen and eraser So what will you choose to do? You can make black marks on life, Or erase them—it’s up to you. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this. Great write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
WaaaaaW this is really really perfect.... I love your way of writting and thinking.. Keep going... Waiting to read more.. Hugssss |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A wise message in a beautiful poem. Margherita |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Good message! Rf |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
El_Campeador... Wise words, make the most out of life's chances, we may not get another chance...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Nicely written. Very wise. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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