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burndu2
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since 2003-03-20
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0 posted 2003-03-30 01:55 PM


We live on the waste
Of a very tinny bug
For he can take us
To our fantasy
Far away from our reality

We find a different kind of love
That now takes all control,
Because it makes all our dreams come true
Like the fate of meeting you

So easily then do we believe
That we can get anything
For then we can get the gold—
That the pirates always hold
For because of this bug
it will surely come true

For if we find it
The rest will come
The fame—the glory
And all their fun

So grab the bug
And have a toast or two
Because this dream
Will never come true


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Little_One
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since 2003-03-16
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montana
1 posted 2003-03-30 02:01 PM


Hey Scott nice writing...see you tommorrow

Kristin

Rdz9
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since 2003-03-16
Posts 142
MT, USA
2 posted 2003-03-31 06:52 PM


Not bad Scott, not bad at all.
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Saluting with misty eyes
3 posted 2003-03-31 09:13 PM


I didn't get a chance to read your first post, YET... however if it is anything like this, I do believe I am going to look forward to your posts.
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Silver_Tryst
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4 posted 2003-04-01 09:15 PM


Good, not bad, interesting thanks
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