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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-30 03:31 AM



He Moves Me

he is
a breeze
I travel
his breath
teases tide
altering course
weaving direction
sailing free
gently he
moves me


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-03-30 03:37 AM


I love the way you write of love
Ericc
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2 posted 2003-03-31 03:17 PM


Simply beautiful.
Eric

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