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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-03-28 05:25 PM



Warring Thoughts

On the outside of, on the inside next
warring thoughts to press me deep.
Losing much of who I am,
costing more than nighttime's sleep.
All I wish is calmness, peace
holding on the soft to keep
dissolve from thoughts
the wars that seep and pressure-pull-me
tears that weep.


M


*the result of not feeling well
and news and news and need

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2003-03-28 06:40 PM


OhWynterGal~
Sending *hugs*

'holding on the soft to keep'

How tender this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-03-28 09:28 PM


i know,from wher u speak,
waking in the night, wondering about my son,
going on l7, along with those sons that are already there,,,,,,,,,,
more haunting each day

WhiteRose
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3 posted 2003-03-29 12:35 PM


On the outside of, on the inside next
warring thoughts to press me deep.

Maureen, Move over and make room, I know of this feeling too.

I've felt the same, and you put it beautifully.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-03-29 12:59 PM


I know, Maureen, I know.  
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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