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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-03-28 02:00 PM

crystal drops
lace window tops,
pretty pictures,
George Seurat,
poetry written
within the dots,

song of romance,
interlude,
somber thoughts, a frazzed mood,
now sent away,
to clouds,
subdued,

jingle, jangle,
my selves in tune
ebony and ivory
make love under moon.

pouring with stars
sweeping my eyes,
rain paints the nights
in its pallette of disguise,

tender the touch,
beckoning lips,
the elusive rainbow,
his longed for kiss

i toss the umbrella
the haze drizzles down,
spinning with illusions,
love comes to town

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

1 posted 2003-03-28 02:07 PM

i toss the umbrella
the haze drizzles down,
spinning with illusions,
love comes to town

A stylish write, I liked the last verse very much.

Regards,
Olias.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2003-03-28 02:19 PM

This reminded me of April showers...Inked Goddess style. Very refreshing!
TD

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-03-28 03:43 PM

I really liked this!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-03-28 05:06 PM

Nice when love comes to town...James

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

5 posted 2003-03-28 07:10 PM

tender the touch,
beckoning lips,
the elusive rainbow,
his longed for kiss

i toss the umbrella
the haze drizzles down,
spinning with illusions,
love comes to town

yes - very elusive - wish it was as easy as tossing an umbrella - I'm amazed at your style ... very nice

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-03-29 01:52 PM

wow! I love this one Michele! What a style you have!

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

7 posted 2003-03-29 11:46 PM

And how often does love come to town. As often as the harvest moon or when the wind blows from the west? Does it come by silver birds or sluggish choo choo's? Or does love come everyday with the typed word?

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-03-30 08:06 AM

thanks, nice words, everyone,

bboy........you are a needle , up that spine,

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

9 posted 2003-04-22 07:10 PM

I was missing this inkedgoddess so I went back to reread an old poem. I am outraged and saddened that she cant post here and I miss seeing her smiling face. Whats gives anyways? I know she can test the limits but so what....I see that others do it too. I know this is a public forum but I think everyone should be allowed to read all the contributors that want to post. If you dont like whats be written, click off it. By the way, did any readers complain about her work or is her banning based solely on the discretion of the moderators. Our boys overseas are fighting to protect all our righs and free speech is one of them. I think a 60 day ban is too harsh and extreme. If we were allowed to vote and I realize this board is not a democracy, I would vote to reinstate her. Thanks!!!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-04-23 01:32 PM

I miss her too.

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